books. (not for reading yet.)

have i ever told any one that i'm writing a book? well, i am. i'm almost done with it.... but i'd like to know, based soley on the title, do you think it would be a good book?

TITLE: Ultimatum 1: William's Visit

Lame title.

The title says little about the book's possible contents, so I can pass no valid judgment.

maybe if you give a little more info on the book... then people might start judging

I think you should just call it Ultamatum and think up another good name for book 2. leaves it simple and to the point. Plus the name Ultamatum would make any book sound Interesting.

you'ev got a point, minato, but this book is goinmg to be part of a 4 part series though... and i plan to call them all ultimatum, but with differnet sub titles.

here, let's try again. this time with the whole book series titles

Ultimatum 1-4
William's Visit
A Shadow's Dream
The Time Puppet
The War of A Thousand Angels

Like Froogle said, can't judge by the titles.

I like the last three but the first one dosn't read out like poetry (which is key in a good book Id wrather read harry potter and the scercorers stone then harry potter:welcome to hogwarts or something like that) but theres a simple way to fix this most aurthers who can't get a working first book title just let the first book be named the main title so heres what the books would read if you choose to do this for your book (and your last title is a bit long for a book title Im not telling you too but I'd segest shortening it to something like Ultimatum:the Final battle or something. just becouse its cheese dosn't make it eny worse of a title)

Ultimatum
Ultimatum:A Shadow's Dream
Ultimatum:The Time Puppet
Ultimatum:The War of A Thousand Angels

huh.... taht makes since, minato.

i'll have to change it to that, like today.

and you can too jude a book by the title. i saw a book the otherday that was intitled, "Gay-neck." no joke, i saw the title, didn't think it would be a very good book, at least for me, i read the back and found i was right. it's a story about some guy that dose something, i don't remeber what, i think it was suppose to be big though.

the point is, individuals can judge a books titile, depending on what they like.

i'v also been working on two other books, here are thier titiles, tell me what you think.

Bloodling
And the World Came Tumbeling Down

those Are nice book titles I'd probably read the bloodling one but the world came tumbaling down dosn't sound like something I'd like to much Although I'd check the back for some more info on it before I decided not to read it.

well, and the world came tumbleing down is about ragnarok, the war off all the gods. and i mean all of them. every god and creature from every mythology from every cornor of the world, they'll all be in my story. and the world will fall.

that's kind of the sum of what's going to happen in it.

cool I might read it if you get it printed out.

yeah. but beforei do i'm going to make the ultimatum series and bloodling. i'm almost done with the first ultimatum, so taht may be comeing to the shelves withen this year or the next.

I'd like to read those.....hurry.

which ones? ultimatum of the others?

all of them lol.

well, i hope to be done with them withen the next few years or so. hopefully.

hurry/.

i know, i know. i'm on page 212 on my first book, my goal is a little past 300, so i'm almost done.

ok then.....kool/

yeah...

so just from reading the title you were interested, huh?

I guess so.

mmmm, well atleast some one is actually interested in it, other than my friend i mean.

lol np

yep. i hop eyou like it, though i won't lie, i'm purposely going to make it so that then ending leaves you hanging, like dreadfully.

ugh another paolini

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i don't get it, but i have a reason for just leaving you hangin gout to dry, in the sequal, it picks up exactly where it left off, right there.

He does the same thing.

oh.... well i'm not sure who you're talking about. and that only happens in the first one. i live you with basically a big bitch slap to the face then i pick you up on the sequal. sun rise, sun set.

ok.